My life sucks.
Basil blinked, trying to get the stars out of his sight as he lay on the floor, unable to move. What happened?
They had just descended to the ground floor, to sneak past more enemy troops (it would have been foolish to rely on open combat, even with Polymnia’s secret power), keeping an eye out for enemies, and then…
He had gotten the feeling that he was about to get attacked, a prickling sensation at the back of his neck, and since he couldn’t see anything ahead, and they were in a narrow hallway, he’d dropped, turning and snapping his fingers (the signal they’d agreed on) in the same movement – and then he’d blacked out.
There was the sound of flesh impacting on flesh, with a side-order of bone, followed by a pained groan. Basil turned his head just in time to see a young m- no, a seriously over-muscled teenager in military fatigues and face paint go down, his legs and wrists crossed over his crotch.
Polymnia was standing in front of the guy, and it was quite obvious what she’d done, making him wonder whether she was a pragmatic fighter or just had issues with male reproductive organs. Two more people were facing her, standing further back with a floating orb made of swirling colour. Even as he took the situation in, the orb shot at Polymnia – who simply punched it back at the two, even though she flinched after her fist made contact.
There was a grunt of effort, and the orb slowed, then stopped before it hit the people in the back. Polymnia began to advance on them, slowly, her body now obscuring his vision of the two enemies.
Get up, Basil. You can not count on her toughness and strength alone. He did a quick check of his body, and found that his legs did not respond, but his arms did, though the right one was sluggish. Fortunately, he’d fallen so his left side pointed towards the fight – Polymnia was fighting off the sphere, which was flying around, shooting at her at oblique angles, trying to circumvent her defenses – but she kept punching it away, even though doing so always made her flinch.
That sphere is probably what knocked me out, Basil thought as he slowly moved a hand towards his belt. The sphere darted up and down at Polymnia, who jumped back to avoid being hit on the head, and he got a look at their foes – a tall guy in a swirly outfit that hurt his eyes, and a shorter girl in a red-and-white bodysuit, with a Japanese fox mask. They were both standing, shoulder to shoulder (or rather, rib to shoulder) with his left and her right arm outstretched, fingers laced together and pointing forward. He could not see their faces, or even eyes, but they seemed to be tense. Are they heterodyning? In mid-combat? It certainly seemed so, judging from their stance and the fact that only one power seemed to be at work, but heterodyning was supposed to be extraordinarily difficult to do under stress!
Either they are professionals or they have some exceptional talent at it. His hand gripped a throwing knife from his belt. Their suits seemed to be armored, and were probably protected against tasers, but a throwing knife might punch a hole in them. Even if it did not cause much damage, it should disrupt their power combination…
The orb shot at Polymnia a bit too high for a good kick, a bit too low to be anything but awkward to punch – but she simply jumped in a graceful motion, jumping higher than a normal person could without taking a running start, leaping over the orb with her arms extended…
And the sphere angled up by ninety degrees, ignoring all laws of physics to fly straight at her exposed belly (her final choice of costume was made of two pieces) as Swirly Guy’s head moved to track her.
Basil did not stop to wonder whether he maybe had enhanced senses or some manner of precognition to keep up with that – all that mattered was that he was distracted, and Fox Girl did not seem to be nearly so quick. He threw the knife, aiming for Swirly Guy’s center of mass, just as the orb was about to hit Polymnia.
The knife sank into Swirly Guy’s gut – not very deep, he had designed it with non-lethal use in mind – and his legs gave out beneath him. The colours in the orb stopped swirling just as it was about to touch Polymnia, turning into a solid blue instead.
Fox Girl turned her head to see what had happened as her friend sank down on his knees, and her sphere flew straight back at her like a cannonball, switching from blue to pink to green to yellow.
And Polymnia completed her vault, rolling over the floor until she was right in front of the girl – whose orb had just touched her stomach and was now circling her body, as if in preparation of being shot off again – and came up with a punch to her chin.
Flawless Shoryuken – just needs some fire, Basil thought as the girl collapsed without a sound, her orb popping like a soap bubble. We can probably make up a gadget for next time, though.
Polymnia looked at the fallen girl, then at Swirly Guy, who had fallen onto his back and was staring with what seemed to be disbelief at the triangular knife in his gut. She quickly checked him over, told him to stay put and came over to Basil, kneeling down next to him.
<Thanks for the assist. That orb was a pain in my butt,> she said as she helped him sit up with one hand (and no sign of any effort). <Do you have something to treat Fulcrum with? And restraints?> She propped him up, sitting, against the wall.
“Numb, getting better,” came his clipped response. “Left big belt pocket, first aid kit. Restraints in pocket to its right.” She nodded, removing the items and rushing over to their foes.
Basil paid no further attention to them, and instead scanned the hallway in both directions. They were just outside the stairwell they had used to come down here and there were no other entryways between it and where the three supervillains lay, so they had probably come out just behind them. How did we not notice them? He looked the other way, and saw only the empty hallway. Sensation was slowly returning to his legs And why are we not getting swarmed by minions? Why is Kudzu attacking a mall in the first place, and during rush hour, as well? And how is he preventing the authorities from noticing anything off about the situation?
He looked at their fallen enemies. Polymnia had zip-tied them by wrists and ankles, then ankle to wrist and finally tied them together back-to-back. It looked like she had treated Fulcrum’s (How does she know his cowl?) wound, and was just coming over with his cleaned knife and kit.
Carefully, he stood up and put them away, mumbling a ‘thank you’ before he stumbled over to Fulcrum and their other two captives. “Fulcrum, right?”
The guy looked up at him, his facial expression hidden by his mask, but Basil could tell that he was… afraid? Unexpected, but I can use that.
“W-what do you want?” the young man asked, voice shaky. The pain was audible.
“I want to know what is going on. Why is Kudzu here, why are you working for him, who else came with you and what is he planning next?” Conveying a glare through a featureless black mask was hard, but Basil did his best nonetheless.
Fulcrum flinched, but answered, “He hired us through the Syndicate. I have no idea what he wants or what exactly he plans next – I just know we were told to patrol, and take you two down if possible. Didn’t expect her to be a freaking brick and you to throw lethal weaponry at us!”
Basil slapped him just as he was starting to get winded up. “Calm down. If you are not prepared to face lethal opposition, then you have chosen the wrong career path. Now, who else is here?“
“J-just the boss, my team, a few burly guys who’re working on some kind of vault, an-“
An ear-piercing sound, like a metallic shriek, interrupted Fulcrum’s answer, making Basil flinch and almost collapse. Fuck, Polymnia!
He whirled around just in time to catch her as she collapsed, unconscious. Drawing his combat knife, he looked around – but there was no other enemy around. What the hell!?
* * *
“May I ask another question?” the cloaked girl asked as they watched the progress on the vault door.
“Me answering to your questions is part of the contract, so yes, ask,” Kudzu said as he looked over the other monitors – the hostages in the central atrium, a few of the patrolling teams looking for whoever had taken down team three. No luck so far, their quarry was good at hiding and sneaking.
“Why didn’t you pull this job after closing hour, when there’d only be a few watchmen around? You’re using that insanely expensive contrivance to hide this action, all these troops to keep the hostages in line, there is at least one hero or vigilante caught up who most likely wouldn’t be here after closing hour…” She let the sentence trail off, leaving the rest to him.
I was wondering when this question would come up. “The vault we want to get into was created by a particularly paranoid contriver. It can only be opened during opening hours, and only if there is a certain minimal number of people inside to suggest that the mall is operating normally.”
Her next question came fast, “That sounds incredibly inconvenient for him, unless he had a backdoor key.”
Kudzu shook his head. “No and no. He didn’t bother with a backdoor key, as that could be stolen and used against him. And as for convenience, he owned the shop it was built under, and could come and go however he pleased, simultaneously providing an alibi for himself. That’s why we need the hostages, and at this time. As soon as the vault is open and the security systems circumvented, we will grab the target item and bail out with escape plan number one, four or seven, depending on the circumstances. No civilians will be harmed, there won’t be any serious property damage and we may even avoid a serious fight with the meddler within, not to mention the heroes outside, if they even notice anything before we’re gone for good.”
The cloaked girl’s hood dipped in a nod. “May I ask how we’re going to circumvent a contriver’s security systems?”
“The men working on it specialise in circumventing contrived security, and they have pulled a job on an installation of this particular contriver before, so they know his style,” he explained. It was kind of fun, teaching this girl. Usually, he had to really push to get people to listen closely to what he was trying to tell them.
“Unless he changed things up for this one,” she replied with a wry tone.
A chuckle from behind them made both Kudzu and the cloaked girl turn around, looking at the raggedly clad young woman – Phasma – in surprise. “What’s so funny?” the cloaked girl asked, suddenly unsure (quite off-balance, as his power told him).
Ah, classic. The most common weakness of inexperienced thinkers – a single unexpected event could throw them off.
“He’s a contriver, greenhorn,” Phasma said. “They don’t adapt well, at least not where their style is concerned. Their whole power comes from their style in the first place, changing it up would play hob with the reliability of their creations, if they’d work in the first place.” She looked straight at him, a red flash beneath her hood showing him where her eyes were. “Who was this guy, anyway? And what happened to him – he can’t be dead, or his stuff wouldn’t work anymore.”
He shrugged in response. “His name is Lanning; one of the truly mad ‘mad scientists’. He was taken down and locked up in the Tartarus Star space station, two years ago.”
“I heard about that loony. Didn’t he try to kick off a robot apocalypse?” the cloaked girl asked with renewed composure. “The New Lennston team took him down.”
“Yes, it was quite a fight,” Phasma supplied. “An entire city block was levelled to the ground, and three of the heroes almost died; Lysander had to retire, afterwards.”
“Hey, boss, I don’t mean to interrupt,” Leet suddenly spoke up, doing just that. “But Fulcrum won’t respond to my calls, nor B- Foxfire or LagForward. Also, it looks like the specialists are about to open the vault.”
Everyone turned to look at the screens. “Can you track their location?” he asked the surveillance specialist.
“They’re in the west wing, first floor, a-“
The specialists opened the vault at that moment. The live feed from the room cut off as an ear-piercing shriek made Kudzu scream in pain.
And then everything went wrong.
I’m sorry for the absence. A combination of sudden sickness (bad), surprise friendtime (good) and family stuff (mixed) quite threw my schedule out of the window.
There’ll be another update over the week, to make up for the missed one. As you might be able to tell, I plan to not drag my feet with this arc, and bring it to a quick (but hopefully not rushed) end before the month is over.
Next, there’ll be an interlude titled “Canary in a Birdcage” (yes, the title is a shoutout to Worm. Shut up, I’m a fan, too), and then Monkey Family, before we get into the last stretch before the final super-arc (B016 to B019) kicks off. If all goes well and according to plan (insert mad, depressed laughter here), book one will be finished by the end of february.
Is this the part where I give my best creepy maniac murderous grinn or do I wait till B016?
Woo! Chapter! Yay!
Wow! New characters that we’ve never seen before! That will totally not relate to a cool new main character!
Although seriously, i hope this means we see Linda (Linda? Linda.) again.
Dammit, Linda was the sister, I meant Terry.
This is just a guess, but I think that the girl asking Kudzu all the questions is Terry.
Part of her power is the ability to ask questions, maybe she needs to actually ask them without her power at times, too.
Ooh, Canary in a Birdcage has got to be a visit back to Australia. On a different note, now we know what Dajisi does with his recruits.
A contriver specialized in robots and nobody wondered if there was a robot inside the vault?
I love it when main characters ask themselves the right questions
The fight scene was neat, especially bringing back the guys from that side-story I liked so much. The explanation part seems to be a bit exposition-heavy, but I can handle that.
Speaking of canary, we have a mention of your super max prison. A space station solves alot of problems with other super prisons. You can’t dig/tunnel out, they can shut off the air, every transport is insanely guarded, and even if you get out/don’t die in a vacuum, you still have to survive reentry. Does your prison have guards or are the prisoners on their own?
Welcome back, but seriously a less than lethal knife? What the hell is that? Isn’t that just a club?
An… Overenthusiastic friend of Mine showed me ohne in real life. It’s basically a triangular blade, just long enough to be properly thrown, with a slightly thicker rod between blade and guard so it can’t penetrate too deeply when thrown (or stabbed) into an adult’s torso or limbs.
Don’t ask me who came up with it or why. I didn’t ask, I was kinda creeped out by my pal’s collection of sharp and pointy stuff at the time.
Why would you be creeped out by sharp and pointy instruments of Kombat? If I ever stumbled upon a collection of swords,scimatars,daggers,katanas and the like, I would be awed
it might have been the loving gleam in her eyes, or the way she talked about them like they were her favourite pets.
or perhaps it was the way she could throw that fucking thing at a target ten meters away and hit bullseye
or maybe, just maybe, it was the fact that her ex-boyfriend’s picture was glued on said target, and she’d just hit him straight in the crotch. kinda unnerving, you know?
Kudzu and pals are about to deal with a pissed-off Irene. Given the presence of Foxfire and LagForward, the Dark’s organization may be involved. (Although Phasma works for a different organization, so what the heck?) Which makes a fight with Irene an internal problem. Gloomglimmer is about to give daddy a work-related headache I think.
Kudzu explicitely said that he hired his people through the Syndicate (which IS the dark’s organisation)
I have a feeling that “Somebody” (I won’t name who) totally forgot about “The Dreaming”.
I’m working on it, but juggling two web serials, studies and a job all at once is quite a strain.
Right now, I’m writing the promised second brennus chapter for this week. I’ll immediately segue into working on the dreaming chapter (which is about 50% done) once I am done, and then start work on the sunday/monday chapter. while also working on my first term paper 😛
I’m trying to point out that you have TOO MUCH on your plate. My personal opinion is that you should set “The Dreaming” aside for however long it takes you to have a steady schedule and routine where you know you can get it done without interfering with any other commitments.
but I want to^^ I have too many ideas, if I focus on just the ones that fit into brennus, I’ll go insane!
I understand completely, it just hurts me to see the struggle. I wish you made enough money from writing that you didn’t have to have a separate job.
Fox Girl’s sphere knocked him out with one hit, this means you either forgot about the Coltenhagen effect mentioned in B008.2.1 or Basil isn’t a metahuman…which leads me to some weird half-formed conjectures.
“When I woke up, you said that me being taken down with one hit from your ball is an indicator for me not being a metahuman. How come?”
“Well, that’s the Coltenhagen effect, duh!” She looked at me like it was obvious.
“The… Coltenhagen effect? I think I heard that somewhere…” I raked my brain, but all I came up with was the word being used, once, regarding ‘Humanity First!’ demanding more non-powered superheroes. But nothing else.
“Well, it’s kinda the reason why there are no non-metahuman superheroes or villains. Or why the military is so damn paranoid about even low-level enemy metas. Simply put…” She thought about it for a moment. “It’s kinda like this – every metahuman has a kind of real low-level power resistance. Not enough to really block powers, but enough to make it possible for them to resist, so to speak. Or at least resist to a meaningful degree.”
“So a metahuman could take more than one hit from your ball?”
She nodded, “Yeah….
notice how Basil has been having massive troubles with sleeping, focusing, keeping his emotions in check and even doing basic gadgeteering (he has a 90% failure rate)
there’s something seriously wrong with his power, and thus his mind (as tenants link up to their host’s lymbic system and all)